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| | | Author: | Nubs_Select  | | Posted: | Nov 27, 2021 19:18 | | Subject: | Criticism Please! | | Viewed: | 309 times | | Topic: | Feedback | |
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| Hi!
I just spent most of the day working on a new interface for my splash page and
was hoping to get some criticism on it. I spent the last several hours spell
checking everything so hopefully that's all good  If there's anything
I should add or if something looks messed up on your end. It all helps!
Thanks!
-Jason
https://store.bricklink.com/Nubs_Select&utm_content=globalnav#/splash
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| | | | | Author: | macebobo | | Posted: | Nov 27, 2021 20:02 | | Subject: | Re: Criticism Please! | | Viewed: | 59 times | | Topic: | Feedback | |
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| In Feedback, Nubs_Select writes:
| | Hi!
I just spent most of the day working on a new interface for my splash page and
was hoping to get some criticism on it. I spent the last several hours spell
checking everything so hopefully that's all good If there's anything
I should add or if something looks messed up on your end. It all helps!
Thanks!
-Jason
https://store.bricklink.com/Nubs_Select&utm_content=globalnav#/splash
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Looks good, but the pizza part reads kind of clumsily.
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| | | | | | | Author: | Nubs_Select | | Posted: | Nov 27, 2021 22:03 | | Subject: | Re: Criticism Please! | | Viewed: | 40 times | | Topic: | Feedback | |
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| | Thank you for pointing it out! I've updated it now. |
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| | | | | Author: | peregrinator | | Posted: | Nov 27, 2021 20:23 | | Subject: | Re: Criticism Please! | | Viewed: | 64 times | | Topic: | Feedback | |
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| In Feedback, Nubs_Select writes:
| | Hi!
I just spent most of the day working on a new interface for my splash page and
was hoping to get some criticism on it. I spent the last several hours spell
checking everything so hopefully that's all good If there's anything
I should add or if something looks messed up on your end. It all helps!
Thanks!
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Couple misspellings: "Amazing Lego Product's And Deals!" there should not
be an apostrophe and you misspelled "Separate" as "Seperate" (later on you spell
it correctly). Otherwise very good
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| | | | | | | Author: | Nubs_Select | | Posted: | Nov 27, 2021 22:01 | | Subject: | Re: Criticism Please! | | Viewed: | 41 times | | Topic: | Feedback | |
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| | Thank you for the help! I've updated it. |
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| | | | | Author: | C0lsanders_ | | Posted: | Nov 27, 2021 22:20 | | Subject: | Re: Criticism Please! | | Viewed: | 38 times | | Topic: | Feedback | |
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| On the Q&A page, "website's" should not have an apostrophe either. Apostrophes
are only used with 1. possessives (like USPS's website, USPS owns it)
or 2. contractions (isn't = is not, the ' replaces the o).
Also, and more critical, on my computer (Win 10, Firefox) the last entry on that
page (about returns) is covered by the "powered by weebly" ad. You might add
some space below the returns entry, to give a gap for the other.
Otherwise, quite good! Probably took some time figuring out all that html and
stuff. I might even ask if I can steal the code, change the text and pictures,
use it on my own page at some point, but I doubt you'd share that.
Miles (C0lsanders_)
In Feedback, Nubs_Select writes:
| | Hi!
I just spent most of the day working on a new interface for my splash page and
was hoping to get some criticism on it. I spent the last several hours spell
checking everything so hopefully that's all good If there's anything
I should add or if something looks messed up on your end. It all helps!
Thanks!
-Jason
https://store.bricklink.com/Nubs_Select&utm_content=globalnav#/splash
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| | | | | | | Author: | Nubs_Select | | Posted: | Nov 27, 2021 22:30 | | Subject: | Re: Criticism Please! | | Viewed: | 40 times | | Topic: | Feedback | |
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| Thank you for pointing that out! I have updated it now. Earlier I had to lower
the font size on all of the text on the Q&A page to get it to fit on my PC screen
since one drawback on the site I used is it can only have x amount of lines.
I don't use firefox so thank you for the heads up on that I've removed
another line so hopefully, it should work now. It's actually quite simple
to use Weebly to make the site. I didn't have to use any coding (except the
flag counter but that was just copied and pasted) feel free to use any part you
would like. If you need any help on yours I might be able to help a bit.
-Jason
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| | | | | Author: | legoman77 | | Posted: | Nov 27, 2021 22:27 | | Subject: | Re: Criticism Please! | | Viewed: | 63 times | | Topic: | Feedback | |
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| In Feedback, Nubs_Select writes:
Criticism Please
You’re too tall. You’re too short. You smell. You have bad breath. You’re too
old. You’re too young. You’re lazy. You eat like a pig. You’re a jerk. You’re
too nice to everyone. You snore. You think you know everything. You drive like
an idiot……
John P
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| | | | | | | Author: | Nubs_Select | | Posted: | Nov 27, 2021 22:31 | | Subject: | Re: Criticism Please! | | Viewed: | 58 times | | Topic: | Feedback | |
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| The most accurate response  |
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| | | | | | | | | Author: | legoman77 | | Posted: | Nov 27, 2021 22:38 | | Subject: | Re: Criticism Please! | | Viewed: | 62 times | | Topic: | Feedback | |
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| In Feedback, Nubs_Select writes: Criticism Please
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Don’t try using any of these, my wife has them copyrighted all of them except
“you’re too tall.”
John P
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| | | | | | | | | | | Author: | Nubs_Select | | Posted: | Nov 27, 2021 22:40 | | Subject: | Re: Criticism Please! | | Viewed: | 53 times | | Topic: | Feedback | |
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| | Ill try my best to refrain myself |
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| | | | | Author: | wahiggin | | Posted: | Nov 27, 2021 22:56 | | Subject: | Re: Criticism Please! | | Viewed: | 61 times | | Topic: | Feedback | |
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| In Feedback, Nubs_Select writes:
| | Hi!
I just spent most of the day working on a new interface for my splash page and
was hoping to get some criticism on it. I spent the last several hours spell
checking everything so hopefully that's all good If there's anything
I should add or if something looks messed up on your end. It all helps!
Thanks!
-Jason
https://store.bricklink.com/Nubs_Select&utm_content=globalnav#/splash
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Looks really great...wanna build one for me too!?
Wesley
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| | | | | | | Author: | Nubs_Select | | Posted: | Nov 27, 2021 23:05 | | Subject: | Re: Criticism Please! | | Viewed: | 102 times | | Topic: | Feedback | |
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| It's pretty simple to make surprisingly! It only took me about a day to make
and most of that time went to spell checking
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| | | | | Author: | legomalego | | Posted: | Nov 28, 2021 12:05 | | Subject: | Re: Criticism Please! | | Viewed: | 42 times | | Topic: | Feedback | |
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| Do I Have To Pay For Insurance?
No, If you pay with Paypal you have buyer's insurance for any orders in this
store and most other stores. It is the seller's responsibility to get the
goods to you once you have paid.
A seller who understands how it works. Refreshing.
I am slightly biased as I have been the lucky recipient of multiple orders from
Jason.
Great product, smooth transactions, quick and well packed shipping. A+++
In Feedback, Nubs_Select writes:
| | Hi!
I just spent most of the day working on a new interface for my splash page and
was hoping to get some criticism on it. I spent the last several hours spell
checking everything so hopefully that's all good If there's anything
I should add or if something looks messed up on your end. It all helps!
Thanks!
-Jason
https://store.bricklink.com/Nubs_Select&utm_content=globalnav#/splash
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| | | | | | | Author: | Nubs_Select | | Posted: | Nov 29, 2021 00:26 | | Subject: | Re: Criticism Please! | | Viewed: | 35 times | | Topic: | Feedback | |
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| | I try my best 😁 |
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| | | | | Author: | randyf | | Posted: | Nov 28, 2021 13:52 | | Subject: | Re: Criticism Please! | | Viewed: | 64 times | | Topic: | Feedback | |
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| In Feedback, Nubs_Select writes:
| | Hi!
I just spent most of the day working on a new interface for my splash page and
was hoping to get some criticism on it. I spent the last several hours spell
checking everything so hopefully that's all good If there's anything
I should add or if something looks messed up on your end. It all helps!
Thanks!
-Jason
https://store.bricklink.com/Nubs_Select&utm_content=globalnav#/splash
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Fully capitalize every instance of "Lego" used on your pages to "LEGO". That
will make you look more professional.
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| | | | | | | Author: | Nubs_Select | | Posted: | Nov 29, 2021 00:27 | | Subject: | Re: Criticism Please! | | Viewed: | 47 times | | Topic: | Feedback | |
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| | Thankyou for the heads up! I’ll update it once I get to work tomorrow. |
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| | | | | Author: | SnarkBricks | | Posted: | Dec 21, 2021 12:29 | | Subject: | Re: Criticism Please! | | Viewed: | 62 times | | Topic: | Feedback | |
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| Put a space between the Thank and you on the last line on the splash page...
Thankyou for taking some time to look at our store!
In Feedback, Nubs_Select writes:
| | Hi!
I just spent most of the day working on a new interface for my splash page and
was hoping to get some criticism on it. I spent the last several hours spell
checking everything so hopefully that's all good If there's anything
I should add or if something looks messed up on your end. It all helps!
Thanks!
-Jason
https://store.bricklink.com/Nubs_Select&utm_content=globalnav#/splash
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| | | | | | | Author: | Nubs_Select | | Posted: | Dec 21, 2021 12:37 | | Subject: | Re: Criticism Please! | | Viewed: | 45 times | | Topic: | Feedback | |
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| | Thank you! I have now updated it. |
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| | | | | Author: | runner.caller | | Posted: | Dec 21, 2021 12:52 | | Subject: | Re: Criticism Please! | | Viewed: | 34 times | | Topic: | Feedback | |
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| In Feedback, Nubs_Select writes:
| | Hi!
I just spent most of the day working on a new interface for my splash page and
was hoping to get some criticism on it. I spent the last several hours spell
checking everything so hopefully that's all good If there's anything
I should add or if something looks messed up on your end. It all helps!
Thanks!
-Jason
https://store.bricklink.com/Nubs_Select&utm_content=globalnav#/splash
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There is not mention of free pizza if someone comes and helps you sort!
Lol, jk!
Looks good!
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| | | | | | | Author: | Nubs_Select | | Posted: | Dec 21, 2021 12:58 | | Subject: | Re: Criticism Please! | | Viewed: | 43 times | | Topic: | Feedback | |
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