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| | | Author: | ralphs_bricks  | | Posted: | May 12, 2021 09:28 | | Subject: | Provide feedback on my Splash page get coupon | | Viewed: | 147 times | | Topic: | General | |
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| I'd love to get feedback on my splash page from buyers at Bricklink. I'd
like to understand a little bit of what's going through your mind if I made
the splash page the default tab when a buyer comes to my store.
The first 10 users to let me know their thoughts in this thread will receive
a 10% off coupon to my store.
Primarily, I'm looking for feedback on if the splash page makes you want
to stay on my store and shop or if it's annoying and you want to leave and
go to another store right away.
To participate:
1. Navigate to https://store.bricklink.com/ralphs_bricks&utm_content=globalnav#/splash
2. Come back and reply to this message with your thoughts and feedback.
3. I'll issue you a coupon whether the feedback is good or bad
Sincerely,
Ralph's Bricks
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| | | | | Author: | peregrinator | | Posted: | May 12, 2021 09:35 | | Subject: | Re: Provide feedback on my Splash page get coupon | | Viewed: | 19 times | | Topic: | General | |
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| It doesn't really make me want to go away, but it doesn't really make
me want to stay either. Personally I find it kind of disorienting.
In General, ralphs_bricks writes:
| | I'd love to get feedback on my splash page from buyers at Bricklink. I'd
like to understand a little bit of what's going through your mind if I made
the splash page the default tab when a buyer comes to my store.
The first 10 users to let me know their thoughts in this thread will receive
a 10% off coupon to my store.
Primarily, I'm looking for feedback on if the splash page makes you want
to stay on my store and shop or if it's annoying and you want to leave and
go to another store right away.
To participate:
1. Navigate to https://store.bricklink.com/ralphs_bricks&utm_content=globalnav#/splash
2. Come back and reply to this message with your thoughts and feedback.
3. I'll issue you a coupon whether the feedback is good or bad
Sincerely,
Ralph's Bricks
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| | | | | Author: | MrPetovan | | Posted: | May 12, 2021 09:40 | | Subject: | Re: Provide feedback on my Splash page get coupon | | Viewed: | 24 times | | Topic: | General | |
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| Your splash page is snazzy but a little overwhelming because of the massive image.
Also there is a “Play” button that suggests a video will play when pressed, but
nothing happened on mobile for me.
I would suggest you to keep the same text but remove the background image entirely
and the column layout.
In General, ralphs_bricks writes:
| | I'd love to get feedback on my splash page from buyers at Bricklink. I'd
like to understand a little bit of what's going through your mind if I made
the splash page the default tab when a buyer comes to my store.
The first 10 users to let me know their thoughts in this thread will receive
a 10% off coupon to my store.
Primarily, I'm looking for feedback on if the splash page makes you want
to stay on my store and shop or if it's annoying and you want to leave and
go to another store right away.
To participate:
1. Navigate to https://store.bricklink.com/ralphs_bricks&utm_content=globalnav#/splash
2. Come back and reply to this message with your thoughts and feedback.
3. I'll issue you a coupon whether the feedback is good or bad
Sincerely,
Ralph's Bricks
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| | | | | | | Author: | ralphs_bricks | | Posted: | May 12, 2021 09:42 | | Subject: | Re: Provide feedback on my Splash page get coupon | | Viewed: | 24 times | | Topic: | General | |
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| You're on mobile, right? That's the experience on mobile at the moment.
I need to fix it so it's better. Check it out on the desktop when you can.
In General, MrPetovan writes:
| | Your splash page is snazzy but a little overwhelming because of the massive image.
Also there is a “Play” button that suggests a video will play when pressed, but
nothing happened on mobile for me.
I would suggest you to keep the same text but remove the background image entirely
and the column layout.
In General, ralphs_bricks writes:
| | I'd love to get feedback on my splash page from buyers at Bricklink. I'd
like to understand a little bit of what's going through your mind if I made
the splash page the default tab when a buyer comes to my store.
The first 10 users to let me know their thoughts in this thread will receive
a 10% off coupon to my store.
Primarily, I'm looking for feedback on if the splash page makes you want
to stay on my store and shop or if it's annoying and you want to leave and
go to another store right away.
To participate:
1. Navigate to https://store.bricklink.com/ralphs_bricks&utm_content=globalnav#/splash
2. Come back and reply to this message with your thoughts and feedback.
3. I'll issue you a coupon whether the feedback is good or bad
Sincerely,
Ralph's Bricks
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| | | | | | | | | Author: | MrPetovan | | Posted: | May 12, 2021 12:18 | | Subject: | Re: Provide feedback on my Splash page get coupon | | Viewed: | 20 times | | Topic: | General | |
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| I now have checked it out on desktop and I personally don't like the autoplaying
impossible-to-pause full-screen video. I don't mind the video itself but
I would prefer if it started out smaller and not playing right away. Since you
have two columns already, you could embed it on the right column without it taking
the whole space including behind text.
As a general rule, autoplaying multimedia content strips control from visitors
and can inconvenience people with specific disabilities like motion sickness
or epilepsy.
In General, ralphs_bricks writes:
| | You're on mobile, right? That's the experience on mobile at the moment.
I need to fix it so it's better. Check it out on the desktop when you can.
In General, MrPetovan writes:
| | Your splash page is snazzy but a little overwhelming because of the massive image.
Also there is a “Play” button that suggests a video will play when pressed, but
nothing happened on mobile for me.
I would suggest you to keep the same text but remove the background image entirely
and the column layout.
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| | | | | Author: | starbeanie | | Posted: | May 12, 2021 09:43 | | Subject: | Re: Provide feedback on my Splash page get coupon | | Viewed: | 24 times | | Topic: | General | |
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| Scrolling images like your background tend to make me nauseous. Particularly
if they are not perfectly steady.
I find I do plenty of business in my shop without having a Splash page.
"Currently only shipping to 🇺🇸" should be "Currently only shipping to US"
In General, ralphs_bricks writes:
| | I'd love to get feedback on my splash page from buyers at Bricklink. I'd
like to understand a little bit of what's going through your mind if I made
the splash page the default tab when a buyer comes to my store.
The first 10 users to let me know their thoughts in this thread will receive
a 10% off coupon to my store.
Primarily, I'm looking for feedback on if the splash page makes you want
to stay on my store and shop or if it's annoying and you want to leave and
go to another store right away.
To participate:
1. Navigate to https://store.bricklink.com/ralphs_bricks&utm_content=globalnav#/splash
2. Come back and reply to this message with your thoughts and feedback.
3. I'll issue you a coupon whether the feedback is good or bad
Sincerely,
Ralph's Bricks
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| | | | | Author: | TechnicBuilt | | Posted: | May 12, 2021 09:46 | | Subject: | Re: Provide feedback on my Splash page get coupon | | Viewed: | 25 times | | Topic: | General | |
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| In General, ralphs_bricks writes:
| | I'd love to get feedback on my splash page from buyers at Bricklink. I'd
like to understand a little bit of what's going through your mind if I made
the splash page the default tab when a buyer comes to my store.
The first 10 users to let me know their thoughts in this thread will receive
a 10% off coupon to my store.
Primarily, I'm looking for feedback on if the splash page makes you want
to stay on my store and shop or if it's annoying and you want to leave and
go to another store right away.
To participate:
1. Navigate to https://store.bricklink.com/ralphs_bricks&utm_content=globalnav#/splash
2. Come back and reply to this message with your thoughts and feedback.
3. I'll issue you a coupon whether the feedback is good or bad
Sincerely,
Ralph's Bricks
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Ralph
It looks really good IMO. On Desktop you see a walkthrough of his store.
I like that it is simple and gives a few quick important points for new buyers.
Only thing I would change is to capitalize us to US or, USA would be better.
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| | | | | | | Author: | ralphs_bricks | | Posted: | May 12, 2021 09:51 | | Subject: | Re: Provide feedback on my Splash page get coupon | | Viewed: | 22 times | | Topic: | General | |
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| Do you not see the emoji's in the text? The only place "us" would show is
where I have the US flag emoji.
Since I don't ship to Canada at the moment I'm not sure if giving you
a 10% off coupon would have any meaning, I mean I can still give you one. I
do appreciate the feedback though.
In General, TechnicBuilt writes:
| | In General, ralphs_bricks writes:
| | I'd love to get feedback on my splash page from buyers at Bricklink. I'd
like to understand a little bit of what's going through your mind if I made
the splash page the default tab when a buyer comes to my store.
The first 10 users to let me know their thoughts in this thread will receive
a 10% off coupon to my store.
Primarily, I'm looking for feedback on if the splash page makes you want
to stay on my store and shop or if it's annoying and you want to leave and
go to another store right away.
To participate:
1. Navigate to https://store.bricklink.com/ralphs_bricks&utm_content=globalnav#/splash
2. Come back and reply to this message with your thoughts and feedback.
3. I'll issue you a coupon whether the feedback is good or bad
Sincerely,
Ralph's Bricks
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Ralph
It looks really good IMO. On Desktop you see a walkthrough of his store.
I like that it is simple and gives a few quick important points for new buyers.
Only thing I would change is to capitalize us to US or, USA would be better.
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| | | | | | | | | Author: | TechnicBuilt | | Posted: | May 12, 2021 10:05 | | Subject: | Re: Provide feedback on my Splash page get coupon | | Viewed: | 31 times | | Topic: | General | |
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| In General, ralphs_bricks writes:
| | Do you not see the emoji's in the text? The only place "us" would show is
where I have the US flag emoji.
Since I don't ship to Canada at the moment I'm not sure if giving you
a 10% off coupon would have any meaning, I mean I can still give you one. I
do appreciate the feedback though.
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No need for a coupon, I watch your Youtube channel and Pop's as well. Great
stuff. Helpfull tips form the channels are all the coupon I need lol.
For me I do see some of the emojis. If the us is supposed to be a US flag then
that emoji is not showing for me for some reason. I am using Chrome. Others
I do see. The truck, swoosh, recycle symbol, and box next to standard shipping
all show up.
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| | | | | | | | | | | Author: | ralphs_bricks | | Posted: | May 12, 2021 10:09 | | Subject: | Re: Provide feedback on my Splash page get coupon | | Viewed: | 16 times | | Topic: | General | |
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| Awesome, thanks for watching.
Thanks for letting me know. I might just kill the flag emoji then.
In General, TechnicBuilt writes:
| | In General, ralphs_bricks writes:
| | Do you not see the emoji's in the text? The only place "us" would show is
where I have the US flag emoji.
Since I don't ship to Canada at the moment I'm not sure if giving you
a 10% off coupon would have any meaning, I mean I can still give you one. I
do appreciate the feedback though.
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No need for a coupon, I watch your Youtube channel and Pop's as well. Great
stuff. Helpfull tips form the channels are all the coupon I need lol.
For me I do see some of the emojis. If the us is supposed to be a US flag then
that emoji is not showing for me for some reason. I am using Chrome. Others
I do see. The truck, swoosh, recycle symbol, and box next to standard shipping
all show up.
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| | | | | | | | | | | | | Author: | TechnicBuilt | | Posted: | May 12, 2021 10:10 | | Subject: | Re: Provide feedback on my Splash page get coupon | | Viewed: | 19 times | | Topic: | General | |
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| In General, ralphs_bricks writes:
| | Awesome, thanks for watching.
Thanks for letting me know. I might just kill the flag emoji then.
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Here is what I see.
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| | | | | | | | | | | | | | | Author: | TechnicBuilt | | Posted: | May 12, 2021 10:13 | | Subject: | Re: Provide feedback on my Splash page get coupon | | Viewed: | 26 times | | Topic: | General | |
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| In General, TechnicBuilt writes:
| | In General, ralphs_bricks writes:
| | Awesome, thanks for watching.
Thanks for letting me know. I might just kill the flag emoji then.
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Here is what I see.
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I would also suggest linking to your Youtube channel if that's something
you wanted to do.
Also I have been meaning to find this out.
What is the model of the bag sealer you use? I like that a lot and would like
to get one.
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| | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | Author: | LegoLDK | | Posted: | May 12, 2021 12:18 | | Subject: | Re: Provide feedback on my Splash page get coupon | | Viewed: | 24 times | | Topic: | General | |
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| In General, TechnicBuilt writes:
| | I would also suggest linking to your Youtube channel if that's something
you wanted to do.
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Thanks for the heads up to Ralph's YouTube channel.
Ralph, just watched your Pick a Brick cup ROI vid. I'll leave aside my views
on calling gross revenue and ROI  can I ask would you list those parts poured
from the cup as new or used?
Oh and I liked the splash vid btw. Might want to turn a little slower for the
seasick out there, but certainly more interesting than a lot of splash pages.
The OCD in me loves the drawer walls.
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| | | | | | | | | Author: | spacecaptain | | Posted: | May 12, 2021 10:54 | | Subject: | Re: Provide feedback on my Splash page get coupon | | Viewed: | 24 times | | Topic: | General | |
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| In General, ralphs_bricks writes:
| | Do you not see the emoji's in the text? The only place "us" would show is
where I have the US flag emoji.
Since I don't ship to Canada at the moment I'm not sure if giving you
a 10% off coupon would have any meaning, I mean I can still give you one. I
do appreciate the feedback though.
In General, TechnicBuilt writes:
| | In General, ralphs_bricks writes:
| | I'd love to get feedback on my splash page from buyers at Bricklink. I'd
like to understand a little bit of what's going through your mind if I made
the splash page the default tab when a buyer comes to my store.
The first 10 users to let me know their thoughts in this thread will receive
a 10% off coupon to my store.
Primarily, I'm looking for feedback on if the splash page makes you want
to stay on my store and shop or if it's annoying and you want to leave and
go to another store right away.
To participate:
1. Navigate to https://store.bricklink.com/ralphs_bricks&utm_content=globalnav#/splash
2. Come back and reply to this message with your thoughts and feedback.
3. I'll issue you a coupon whether the feedback is good or bad
Sincerely,
Ralph's Bricks
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Ralph
It looks really good IMO. On Desktop you see a walkthrough of his store.
I like that it is simple and gives a few quick important points for new buyers.
Only thing I would change is to capitalize us to US or, USA would be better.
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I just see the lower case "us" as well instead of "US". Maybe lessen the width
of the black transparent section and lower the font size a tad so the walkthrough
is not covered as much.
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| | | | | | | Author: | ralphs_bricks | | Posted: | May 12, 2021 11:53 | | Subject: | Re: Provide feedback on my Splash page get coupon | | Viewed: | 30 times | | Topic: | General | |
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| Looks like Windows doesn't support Flag emoji's
from https://emojipedia.org/flags/
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TIL, Interesting!
In General, TechnicBuilt writes:
| | In General, ralphs_bricks writes:
| | I'd love to get feedback on my splash page from buyers at Bricklink. I'd
like to understand a little bit of what's going through your mind if I made
the splash page the default tab when a buyer comes to my store.
The first 10 users to let me know their thoughts in this thread will receive
a 10% off coupon to my store.
Primarily, I'm looking for feedback on if the splash page makes you want
to stay on my store and shop or if it's annoying and you want to leave and
go to another store right away.
To participate:
1. Navigate to https://store.bricklink.com/ralphs_bricks&utm_content=globalnav#/splash
2. Come back and reply to this message with your thoughts and feedback.
3. I'll issue you a coupon whether the feedback is good or bad
Sincerely,
Ralph's Bricks
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Ralph
It looks really good IMO. On Desktop you see a walkthrough of his store.
I like that it is simple and gives a few quick important points for new buyers.
Only thing I would change is to capitalize us to US or, USA would be better.
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| | | | | Author: | Tracyd | | Posted: | May 12, 2021 09:51 | | Subject: | Re: Provide feedback on my Splash page get coupon | | Viewed: | 20 times | | Topic: | General | |
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| In General, ralphs_bricks writes:
| | I'd love to get feedback on my splash page from buyers at Bricklink. I'd
like to understand a little bit of what's going through your mind if I made
the splash page the default tab when a buyer comes to my store.
The first 10 users to let me know their thoughts in this thread will receive
a 10% off coupon to my store.
Primarily, I'm looking for feedback on if the splash page makes you want
to stay on my store and shop or if it's annoying and you want to leave and
go to another store right away.
To participate:
1. Navigate to https://store.bricklink.com/ralphs_bricks&utm_content=globalnav#/splash
2. Come back and reply to this message with your thoughts and feedback.
3. I'll issue you a coupon whether the feedback is good or bad
Sincerely,
Ralph's Bricks
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Looks ok to me, no dizziness or nausea. It might not be for everyone, but they
can easily click away from it.
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| | | | | Author: | CLBoyce | | Posted: | May 12, 2021 09:55 | | Subject: | Re: Provide feedback on my Splash page get coupon | | Viewed: | 21 times | | Topic: | General | |
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| In General, ralphs_bricks writes:
| | I'd love to get feedback on my splash page from buyers at Bricklink. I'd
like to understand a little bit of what's going through your mind if I made
the splash page the default tab when a buyer comes to my store.
The first 10 users to let me know their thoughts in this thread will receive
a 10% off coupon to my store.
Primarily, I'm looking for feedback on if the splash page makes you want
to stay on my store and shop or if it's annoying and you want to leave and
go to another store right away.
To participate:
1. Navigate to https://store.bricklink.com/ralphs_bricks&utm_content=globalnav#/splash
2. Come back and reply to this message with your thoughts and feedback.
3. I'll issue you a coupon whether the feedback is good or bad
Sincerely,
Ralph's Bricks
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I think its pretty cool, I've never seen anything like that on another shops
Splash... Not sure why it would turn anyone away from your shop, I certainly
wouldn't shy away because of it.
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| | | | | Author: | par016 | | Posted: | May 12, 2021 10:33 | | Subject: | Re: Provide feedback on my Splash page get coupon | | Viewed: | 25 times | | Topic: | General | |
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| In General, ralphs_bricks writes:
| | I'd love to get feedback on my splash page from buyers at Bricklink. I'd
like to understand a little bit of what's going through your mind if I made
the splash page the default tab when a buyer comes to my store.
The first 10 users to let me know their thoughts in this thread will receive
a 10% off coupon to my store.
Primarily, I'm looking for feedback on if the splash page makes you want
to stay on my store and shop or if it's annoying and you want to leave and
go to another store right away.
To participate:
1. Navigate to https://store.bricklink.com/ralphs_bricks&utm_content=globalnav#/splash
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| | 2. Come back and reply to this message with your thoughts and feedback.
3. I'll issue you a coupon whether the feedback is good or bad
Sincerely,
Ralph's Bricks
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Looks good to me. Video plays smoothly on my android phone and doesn't disorient
me. I guess the video is more of a personal opinion. Just a few small tweaks
I'd make:
I'd change "Lots are bagged together to minimize the number of bags needed."
to "Lots are bagged together to minimize waste." or something like that. the
point is the environmentally friendly part. Bagged together already implies you
are going to use less bags.
Not sure why but I'd move the * on free shipping to after the 'on order
over $35' and might just eliminate the asterisks in general and put that
it's only for the environmentally friendly option right there.
You might want to clarify if your shipping rates start at those price points
or if that is a blanket cost on all orders no matter how big they are.
And last thing is I like your shipping options idea but the smallest number of
bags for an order is always 1. If I buy 100 lots in your store my preference
would be to have them bagged somewhere between all in 1 bag and in 100 bags.
At least in my store I group a few lots together in each bag depending on how
many of each lot was ordered. I would assume you aren't putting them all
in 1 bag but you may want to clarify that or add it as an option.
Like I said just minor tweaks I'd suggest but it looks great regardless so
no need to change anything if you don't want.
Pete
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| | | | | Author: | macebobo | | Posted: | May 12, 2021 10:58 | | Subject: | Re: Provide feedback on my Splash page get coupon | | Viewed: | 26 times | | Topic: | General | |
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| In General, ralphs_bricks writes:
| | I'd love to get feedback on my splash page from buyers at Bricklink. I'd
like to understand a little bit of what's going through your mind if I made
the splash page the default tab when a buyer comes to my store.
The first 10 users to let me know their thoughts in this thread will receive
a 10% off coupon to my store.
Primarily, I'm looking for feedback on if the splash page makes you want
to stay on my store and shop or if it's annoying and you want to leave and
go to another store right away.
To participate:
1. Navigate to https://store.bricklink.com/ralphs_bricks&utm_content=globalnav#/splash
2. Come back and reply to this message with your thoughts and feedback.
3. I'll issue you a coupon whether the feedback is good or bad
Sincerely,
Ralph's Bricks
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No coupon needed, but I watch your youtube channel and wanted to give feedback
for things I've learned from you.
1) Video is nauseating. I physically could not watch it. It is too large on my
screen (I'm on a desktop) The only way I could stop it was block the youtube
frame.
2) I use uMatrix and I had to allow a few domains to get anything to show up,
privacy focused people may not be able to see it, unless they do the same.
3) Some of the verbiage used could be wordsmithed a bit, no specific suggestions,
just seems a bit clumsy.
Keep on rocking it on you tube, I love the new series with Derek.
Best of luck.
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| | | | | Author: | Anthony_NL | | Posted: | May 12, 2021 12:42 | | Subject: | Re: Provide feedback on my Splash page get coupon | | Viewed: | 28 times | | Topic: | General | |
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| In General, ralphs_bricks writes:
| | I'd love to get feedback on my splash page from buyers at Bricklink. I'd
like to understand a little bit of what's going through your mind if I made
the splash page the default tab when a buyer comes to my store.
The first 10 users to let me know their thoughts in this thread will receive
a 10% off coupon to my store.
Primarily, I'm looking for feedback on if the splash page makes you want
to stay on my store and shop or if it's annoying and you want to leave and
go to another store right away.
To participate:
1. Navigate to https://store.bricklink.com/ralphs_bricks&utm_content=globalnav#/splash
2. Come back and reply to this message with your thoughts and feedback.
3. I'll issue you a coupon whether the feedback is good or bad
Sincerely,
Ralph's Bricks
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My experience on desktop:
At first, it is disorienting and also makes me wonder if I miss something important
in the video when I'm reading the text. (I didn't know you could place
a video, so also that surprised me.) So I was looking what the video was about,
when I saw it is just is a video of inventory, I only started to read. I didn't
made me leave, but it wouldn't have made me want to buy.
Another thing, also mentioned above, is the us instead of an emoji (if you look
good, you see it has a slightly different layout and thus should be an emoji
rather than a spelling error).
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USA, New York
Canada, Alberta
United Kingdom, England
Netherlands, Noord-Brabant